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powerful little experience with a compelling view into both speakers. the parallellism going on was a really cool visual i havent seen done too much! the art was really simple but also incredibly fitting and overall a treat aesthetically. i agree with gaydarade - i would've loved to hear sound in some format!

Short but powerful—this one's going to stick with me for a while.. I really enjoyed the use of parallel structure, the way you layered colors for both speakers, the use of the whole screen to display text, and the illustrations.

The color theory here is really excellent, with the peach tones setting the stage. This idea of two ends of a gradient, and the ways they overlap. The tension between the two characters. The semi-diptych poem. It adds a lot on top of this spiteful envious text.

I loved the silhouette tracings. I loved the placement of text on the screen, I loved how those two things interplayed, avoiding each other and becoming enmeshed with hostility.

There was a lot of artistic unity in this. So I was kind of disappointed that there wasn't much of a soundscape. Not a big takeaway, but notable for me.